Title– A Near Thing (4/4)
Author– jlrpuck
Rating – T
Pairing – Peter Carlisle/Rose Tyler
Disclaimer – Characters from Blackpool and Doctor Who are the property of the BBC, and are used with the greatest of love and respect; no profit is intended from the writing or sharing of this story.
Summary – Rose’s job is dangerous—but so is Peter’s.
Author’s Notes – Beta’d with flair by both
chicklet73 and
earlgreytea68; thank you so much to both of them for their suggestions, encouragement, and assistance.
O Thou unknown, Almighty Cause
Of all my hope and fear!
In whose dread presence, ere an hour,
Perhaps I must appear!
- Robert Burns, In the Prospect of Death
Part One | Part Two | Part Three | Part Four
Peter returned to work after two weeks’ recuperation at home—time enough for him to be up to going to work, but still earlier than Rose or his doctor would have liked. It was odd to be back in the Pen, to be back to the relative normalcy of a day in the office.
“You want to know the status of our fine friend?” Elias asked, once he and Peter had the usually-busy room to themselves. His partner, unsurprisingly, had recovered much more quickly, and had been back for nearly a month by then.
Peter glanced around to the empty desks, feeling a pang of jealousy. His colleagues were all out, doing their jobs, finding bad guys; he was trapped at his desk for at least another month, consigned to fielding phone calls and wrangling paperwork.
He hated being injured.
“Carlisle? You there?” Elias was snapping his fingers, trying to get Peter’s attention.
“Aye. Feeling sorry for myself for bein’ trapped in here.”
His partner gave him a sly grin. “What makes you think you’re any less effective for being stuck here, eh?” Elias opened a drawer in his desk, pulling out a thin folder and tossing it over to Peter. “Case in point. Our fine friend.”
Peter opened the folder to find a picture of the man who’d shot the two of them, and felt a flash of hate for the face that glared back at him. He’d heard Nonnie had been caught—Rose, of all people, was the one to tell him, shortly before his DCI called with the news. She’d seemed satisfied as she shared what she knew of Nonnie’s arrest; Peter had felt nothing but weary relief.
“What of him?”
“No disrespect to our colleagues—they really did try to nab the bastard, you know. But it was a fine bit of desk jockeying by yours truly that led to his arrest.” Elias beamed, full of pride.
“I thought we weren’t allowed to work that case. Something about ‘vengeance’ or ‘personal involvement’,” Peter replied, drily.
Elias put on an air of wounded innocence. “I hardly broke a rule, Peter—”
“By ‘hardly,’ you mean ‘I bent the ever-loving hell out of a rule’, Elias.”
“That’s not important. What is important, is that Charlie and Brooks were able to arrest him because of something I did, from this desk right here.” Elias tapped the blotter in front of him. “So don’t feel sorry for yourself, thinking you can’t do a bloody thing because you’re trapped behind a desk. That’s a load of bollocks, and I don’t want to be near you if you’re thinking like that.”
Peter blinked, taken aback by the vehemence with which Elias spoke.
“Right,” he finally said, glancing down at his desk.
“Good.”
Peter reached for the pen he habitually kept at the top of his blotter, pulling it towards him and idly spinning it on the note-bedecked paper. “You use that pep talk often?”
“Haven’t needed to.”
Peter raised an eyebrow, but remained silent.
“Honestly, Carlisle, you’re the most emotionally needy partner I’ve ever worked with. You’re the only person I’ve used it on.”
“Mostly because I suspect I’m the only person who’d not tell you to sod off upon hearing it.”
“That might be truth.”
Peter grinned. “So long as we’re honest about that. Now. What rule-bending treats have you secreted away for us?”
~ - ~
Peter had been back to work for a few weeks by the time Rose began to feel under the weather. She was exhausted, and achy, and finally had to admit that perhaps she was battling something a bit more severe than the twenty-four hour bug which had been going around.
It was a bit of a surprise, then, to learn that she was pregnant and not simply ill.
“You’re sure?” she asked the doctor for the fifth time. “Really sure?”
“Yes, Rose. I’m sure.” The woman had been her doctor since she’d come to Pete’s Universe; had been the doctor she and Peter had come to see when they’d had trouble conceiving. She looked as disbelievingly elated at the news as Rose felt, and continued, “You’re a couple of months along, give or take.”
“’m pregnant,” Rose murmured, stunned. Finally, finally, she and Peter had succeeded. And a few months along…she’d been pregnant when Peter had been shot. She felt a brief chill at the idea that he might have died before having the opportunity to find out they were going to have a child together.
“Yes, Rose.” The doctor patted her shoulder, then turned to leave the room. “I suggest getting a lot of rest, and perhaps putting in a pair of earplugs before you tell your husband. I’ll be in my office once you’ve dressed.
Rose was left alone in the examination room, thoughts rushing madly through her head. She was pregnant. With Peter’s child.
She couldn’t get dressed quickly enough, wanted to be home, waiting for Peter, wanted to tell him the news as soon as she could. She rang upstairs to Mickey’s desk before she left, simply saying “Goin’ home. In tomorrow. Maybe the day after.” before rushing out the door.
Mercifully, it was one of the evenings when Peter was home early from work. He was still mostly confined to desk duty—work protocols dictated he have three months out of the field, regardless of how well he claimed to feel—but he still seemed to be doing a fine job of working challenging cases and his usual punishing hours.
“You’re home!” he exclaimed as he closed the door behind him, his voice carrying down the hall. “How am I supposed to set ye a surprise for your birthday if you’re lurking in the house?” He entered the lounge, grinning.
She’d completely forgotten it was her birthday; she blinked, stunned.
“Rose?” Peter crossed over to where she sat on the sofa, settling down next to her in the small space available. “Are ye well?”
She blinked, focusing on the man in front of her, her eyes tracing over his beloved features. He watched her, confused, his focus unwavering as he waited for her to say something.
“We’re pregnant,” she finally blurted out, grinning madly.
Peter’s jaw went slack, his gaze riveted to hers. “Really?” he finally asked, voice hoarse.
“Really,” she replied, her grin softening to a smile.
“A baby?” His eyes suddenly shone, full of hope. He’d wanted a baby so desperately; each time she’d thought, perhaps, she’d been pregnant, he’d been more excited than she, and had taken each negative as a devastating blow.
“Yeah.” She moved her hand to rest on her stomach, protective of the new life forming there.
Peter glanced down, seeing where her hand rested, and moved to cover her hand with his. “Our baby.” A beaming smile spread across his face, the corners of his eyes crinkling with happiness. He giggled then tilted his head back and shouted—a sound of pure, unrestrained joy.
“Our baby,” she replied, joining him in laughter. “Our baby!” She shouted the words into the small room, leaning into Peter. He moved, his arms enfolding her in an embrace; he leaned back, pulling her with him so they both reclined against the sofa, and began to excitedly whisper about the future.
~ - ~
“I need to talk with you.” Peter pushed off from the wall outside the back entrance to the Yard, falling neatly into step with Elias and Ruby as they arrived for work the next morning.
Ruby slowed, glancing to him. “Shall I leave you, then?”
“Nae, ye should be along for this as well.”
Peter suspected that both of the McCoys knew at that point what he’d be telling them—at least, if their expressions were anything to go by. Elias was wearing the smirk he’d never learned to hide—the one that meant he’d just come to a dazzling conclusion and couldn’t wait to be proved right. Ruby let a slow smile cross her lips, and gave him what could only be described as a knowing look.
“Yeah, yeah, let’s along to anywhere but here, shall we?” He strode ahead of the pair, leading the way down the road to a small alley which cut towards the Embankment. Elias hurried to catch up to him, while Ruby followed behind, content to let the two men talk. Or not.
He led Elias past their usual ‘remote office’, all the way to the coffee shop they used to out-and-out hide; it was busy enough that they could often talk without worrying overmuch about being eavesdropped on, and far enough away from the office that there was little chance of anyone finding them: in short, it was perfect.
It also happened to be the very same coffee shop Elias had invited him to, back when Peter had been mulling accepting the job he now held.
“Right, out with it, Carlisle,” Ruby said as they finally settled at a table in the crowded café.
Elias calmly stirred his tea, happy to let Ruby carry the curiosity for both of them.
Peter opened his mouth…and found he simply wasn’t able to speak. He closed it, tried again; still no luck.
Ruby leaned forward, patting his hand. “’s alright, Peter. Drink up.”
The three of them sat together, sipping their drinks, watching the crowd ebb and flow around them. And then, without thought, Peter said, “We’re having a baby.” He blinked, surprised, then grinned.
Elias smiled in return, offering “Congratulations,” as he clapped Peter on the shoulder.
“I’m so happy for you both,” Ruby said, beaming. “I’d kiss you, but, well…”
“People would talk,” Elias added, waggling his eyebrows.
“Like they don’t already?” Peter asked, putting on his best innocent expression.
“Point.” Elias took a sip of tea.
“How’s Rose?” Ruby asked, leaning forward.
“As well as can be, I guess. She was roundly cursing my name this morning when I left.”
“Sounds about right. She’ll be fine, given time.” Ruby pushed her empty mug away from her, settling back in her chair as she began to think.
“Rose, I think, will be giving you a ring at some point today. She’d mentioned she wanted to have lunch…so, ah, maybe don’t mention that I told you? I think she wanted to surprise you.”
“Not unless she asks,” Ruby replied, smiling indulgently.
Peter leaned back in his chair, his hand idly turning the nearly-empty coffee cup as the three of them settled back into happy silence.
~ - ~
Rose was pulled from sleep—a delightful dream involving Peter, and a field of soft green grass, and blue skies—by the squalling of an infant.
“Your turn,” she groaned, rolling over, her hand reaching to thump Peter on the chest.
Her arm landed in empty space, although the sheet was still warm.
Lucy squalled once more, then quieted. Rose could hear the soft sounds of Peter speaking to her, and propped herself up on her arm.
Soft morning light filled the room; it was later than she’d thought. Peter was across the room, his back to the bed as he stood over the bassinet. He was holding Lucy, looking down at her as he rocked her side-to-side; Rose quickly lay down as she saw him turn to take their daughter to the changing table, to take care of her soiled nappy.
She never had the chance to watch Peter with Lucy, at least not when he thought he wasn’t being watched; she wanted to enjoy the moment, to see him speak to their daughter in Gaelic (he’d been studying the language again, wanting to be able to converse with her fluently by the time she could speak). Peter tickled Lucy’s tummy as he finished, earning a giggle from their daughter; he grinned sleepily in response, then scooped her up into his arms.
He crooned to her as he crossed the room, heading for bed; Rose rolled over, blinking her eyes open, greeting Peter with a smile.
“H’lo,” she whispered.
He smiled back at her, before returning his attention to Lucy. He settled into bed, then gently lay back, shifting Lucy to rest on his chest, gently rubbing their daughter’s back as she squirmed briefly.
“You’re too thin for her,” Rose said softly, smiling as she curled against her husband.
“Ye’ve nae complained.”
“No,” she agreed, placing a gentle kiss against his skin. The light from the small lamp on the bedside table—most likely turned on by Peter when he’d risen to take care of Lucy—caught the quick shine of one of his scars, and she leaned up to place a quick kiss across it as well.
Peter slid his arm under her shoulders, pulling her to him for a soft kiss; his other hand rested on Lucy’s back, keeping her safely in place.
“Good morning, my wife,” he whispered, his dark eyes warm.
She smiled, whispering in response, “Good morning.”
~ fin ~
Author– jlrpuck
Rating – T
Pairing – Peter Carlisle/Rose Tyler
Disclaimer – Characters from Blackpool and Doctor Who are the property of the BBC, and are used with the greatest of love and respect; no profit is intended from the writing or sharing of this story.
Summary – Rose’s job is dangerous—but so is Peter’s.
Author’s Notes – Beta’d with flair by both
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Of all my hope and fear!
In whose dread presence, ere an hour,
Perhaps I must appear!
- Robert Burns, In the Prospect of Death
Part One | Part Two | Part Three | Part Four
Peter returned to work after two weeks’ recuperation at home—time enough for him to be up to going to work, but still earlier than Rose or his doctor would have liked. It was odd to be back in the Pen, to be back to the relative normalcy of a day in the office.
“You want to know the status of our fine friend?” Elias asked, once he and Peter had the usually-busy room to themselves. His partner, unsurprisingly, had recovered much more quickly, and had been back for nearly a month by then.
Peter glanced around to the empty desks, feeling a pang of jealousy. His colleagues were all out, doing their jobs, finding bad guys; he was trapped at his desk for at least another month, consigned to fielding phone calls and wrangling paperwork.
He hated being injured.
“Carlisle? You there?” Elias was snapping his fingers, trying to get Peter’s attention.
“Aye. Feeling sorry for myself for bein’ trapped in here.”
His partner gave him a sly grin. “What makes you think you’re any less effective for being stuck here, eh?” Elias opened a drawer in his desk, pulling out a thin folder and tossing it over to Peter. “Case in point. Our fine friend.”
Peter opened the folder to find a picture of the man who’d shot the two of them, and felt a flash of hate for the face that glared back at him. He’d heard Nonnie had been caught—Rose, of all people, was the one to tell him, shortly before his DCI called with the news. She’d seemed satisfied as she shared what she knew of Nonnie’s arrest; Peter had felt nothing but weary relief.
“What of him?”
“No disrespect to our colleagues—they really did try to nab the bastard, you know. But it was a fine bit of desk jockeying by yours truly that led to his arrest.” Elias beamed, full of pride.
“I thought we weren’t allowed to work that case. Something about ‘vengeance’ or ‘personal involvement’,” Peter replied, drily.
Elias put on an air of wounded innocence. “I hardly broke a rule, Peter—”
“By ‘hardly,’ you mean ‘I bent the ever-loving hell out of a rule’, Elias.”
“That’s not important. What is important, is that Charlie and Brooks were able to arrest him because of something I did, from this desk right here.” Elias tapped the blotter in front of him. “So don’t feel sorry for yourself, thinking you can’t do a bloody thing because you’re trapped behind a desk. That’s a load of bollocks, and I don’t want to be near you if you’re thinking like that.”
Peter blinked, taken aback by the vehemence with which Elias spoke.
“Right,” he finally said, glancing down at his desk.
“Good.”
Peter reached for the pen he habitually kept at the top of his blotter, pulling it towards him and idly spinning it on the note-bedecked paper. “You use that pep talk often?”
“Haven’t needed to.”
Peter raised an eyebrow, but remained silent.
“Honestly, Carlisle, you’re the most emotionally needy partner I’ve ever worked with. You’re the only person I’ve used it on.”
“Mostly because I suspect I’m the only person who’d not tell you to sod off upon hearing it.”
“That might be truth.”
Peter grinned. “So long as we’re honest about that. Now. What rule-bending treats have you secreted away for us?”
~ - ~
Peter had been back to work for a few weeks by the time Rose began to feel under the weather. She was exhausted, and achy, and finally had to admit that perhaps she was battling something a bit more severe than the twenty-four hour bug which had been going around.
It was a bit of a surprise, then, to learn that she was pregnant and not simply ill.
“You’re sure?” she asked the doctor for the fifth time. “Really sure?”
“Yes, Rose. I’m sure.” The woman had been her doctor since she’d come to Pete’s Universe; had been the doctor she and Peter had come to see when they’d had trouble conceiving. She looked as disbelievingly elated at the news as Rose felt, and continued, “You’re a couple of months along, give or take.”
“’m pregnant,” Rose murmured, stunned. Finally, finally, she and Peter had succeeded. And a few months along…she’d been pregnant when Peter had been shot. She felt a brief chill at the idea that he might have died before having the opportunity to find out they were going to have a child together.
“Yes, Rose.” The doctor patted her shoulder, then turned to leave the room. “I suggest getting a lot of rest, and perhaps putting in a pair of earplugs before you tell your husband. I’ll be in my office once you’ve dressed.
Rose was left alone in the examination room, thoughts rushing madly through her head. She was pregnant. With Peter’s child.
She couldn’t get dressed quickly enough, wanted to be home, waiting for Peter, wanted to tell him the news as soon as she could. She rang upstairs to Mickey’s desk before she left, simply saying “Goin’ home. In tomorrow. Maybe the day after.” before rushing out the door.
Mercifully, it was one of the evenings when Peter was home early from work. He was still mostly confined to desk duty—work protocols dictated he have three months out of the field, regardless of how well he claimed to feel—but he still seemed to be doing a fine job of working challenging cases and his usual punishing hours.
“You’re home!” he exclaimed as he closed the door behind him, his voice carrying down the hall. “How am I supposed to set ye a surprise for your birthday if you’re lurking in the house?” He entered the lounge, grinning.
She’d completely forgotten it was her birthday; she blinked, stunned.
“Rose?” Peter crossed over to where she sat on the sofa, settling down next to her in the small space available. “Are ye well?”
She blinked, focusing on the man in front of her, her eyes tracing over his beloved features. He watched her, confused, his focus unwavering as he waited for her to say something.
“We’re pregnant,” she finally blurted out, grinning madly.
Peter’s jaw went slack, his gaze riveted to hers. “Really?” he finally asked, voice hoarse.
“Really,” she replied, her grin softening to a smile.
“A baby?” His eyes suddenly shone, full of hope. He’d wanted a baby so desperately; each time she’d thought, perhaps, she’d been pregnant, he’d been more excited than she, and had taken each negative as a devastating blow.
“Yeah.” She moved her hand to rest on her stomach, protective of the new life forming there.
Peter glanced down, seeing where her hand rested, and moved to cover her hand with his. “Our baby.” A beaming smile spread across his face, the corners of his eyes crinkling with happiness. He giggled then tilted his head back and shouted—a sound of pure, unrestrained joy.
“Our baby,” she replied, joining him in laughter. “Our baby!” She shouted the words into the small room, leaning into Peter. He moved, his arms enfolding her in an embrace; he leaned back, pulling her with him so they both reclined against the sofa, and began to excitedly whisper about the future.
~ - ~
“I need to talk with you.” Peter pushed off from the wall outside the back entrance to the Yard, falling neatly into step with Elias and Ruby as they arrived for work the next morning.
Ruby slowed, glancing to him. “Shall I leave you, then?”
“Nae, ye should be along for this as well.”
Peter suspected that both of the McCoys knew at that point what he’d be telling them—at least, if their expressions were anything to go by. Elias was wearing the smirk he’d never learned to hide—the one that meant he’d just come to a dazzling conclusion and couldn’t wait to be proved right. Ruby let a slow smile cross her lips, and gave him what could only be described as a knowing look.
“Yeah, yeah, let’s along to anywhere but here, shall we?” He strode ahead of the pair, leading the way down the road to a small alley which cut towards the Embankment. Elias hurried to catch up to him, while Ruby followed behind, content to let the two men talk. Or not.
He led Elias past their usual ‘remote office’, all the way to the coffee shop they used to out-and-out hide; it was busy enough that they could often talk without worrying overmuch about being eavesdropped on, and far enough away from the office that there was little chance of anyone finding them: in short, it was perfect.
It also happened to be the very same coffee shop Elias had invited him to, back when Peter had been mulling accepting the job he now held.
“Right, out with it, Carlisle,” Ruby said as they finally settled at a table in the crowded café.
Elias calmly stirred his tea, happy to let Ruby carry the curiosity for both of them.
Peter opened his mouth…and found he simply wasn’t able to speak. He closed it, tried again; still no luck.
Ruby leaned forward, patting his hand. “’s alright, Peter. Drink up.”
The three of them sat together, sipping their drinks, watching the crowd ebb and flow around them. And then, without thought, Peter said, “We’re having a baby.” He blinked, surprised, then grinned.
Elias smiled in return, offering “Congratulations,” as he clapped Peter on the shoulder.
“I’m so happy for you both,” Ruby said, beaming. “I’d kiss you, but, well…”
“People would talk,” Elias added, waggling his eyebrows.
“Like they don’t already?” Peter asked, putting on his best innocent expression.
“Point.” Elias took a sip of tea.
“How’s Rose?” Ruby asked, leaning forward.
“As well as can be, I guess. She was roundly cursing my name this morning when I left.”
“Sounds about right. She’ll be fine, given time.” Ruby pushed her empty mug away from her, settling back in her chair as she began to think.
“Rose, I think, will be giving you a ring at some point today. She’d mentioned she wanted to have lunch…so, ah, maybe don’t mention that I told you? I think she wanted to surprise you.”
“Not unless she asks,” Ruby replied, smiling indulgently.
Peter leaned back in his chair, his hand idly turning the nearly-empty coffee cup as the three of them settled back into happy silence.
~ - ~
Rose was pulled from sleep—a delightful dream involving Peter, and a field of soft green grass, and blue skies—by the squalling of an infant.
“Your turn,” she groaned, rolling over, her hand reaching to thump Peter on the chest.
Her arm landed in empty space, although the sheet was still warm.
Lucy squalled once more, then quieted. Rose could hear the soft sounds of Peter speaking to her, and propped herself up on her arm.
Soft morning light filled the room; it was later than she’d thought. Peter was across the room, his back to the bed as he stood over the bassinet. He was holding Lucy, looking down at her as he rocked her side-to-side; Rose quickly lay down as she saw him turn to take their daughter to the changing table, to take care of her soiled nappy.
She never had the chance to watch Peter with Lucy, at least not when he thought he wasn’t being watched; she wanted to enjoy the moment, to see him speak to their daughter in Gaelic (he’d been studying the language again, wanting to be able to converse with her fluently by the time she could speak). Peter tickled Lucy’s tummy as he finished, earning a giggle from their daughter; he grinned sleepily in response, then scooped her up into his arms.
He crooned to her as he crossed the room, heading for bed; Rose rolled over, blinking her eyes open, greeting Peter with a smile.
“H’lo,” she whispered.
He smiled back at her, before returning his attention to Lucy. He settled into bed, then gently lay back, shifting Lucy to rest on his chest, gently rubbing their daughter’s back as she squirmed briefly.
“You’re too thin for her,” Rose said softly, smiling as she curled against her husband.
“Ye’ve nae complained.”
“No,” she agreed, placing a gentle kiss against his skin. The light from the small lamp on the bedside table—most likely turned on by Peter when he’d risen to take care of Lucy—caught the quick shine of one of his scars, and she leaned up to place a quick kiss across it as well.
Peter slid his arm under her shoulders, pulling her to him for a soft kiss; his other hand rested on Lucy’s back, keeping her safely in place.
“Good morning, my wife,” he whispered, his dark eyes warm.
She smiled, whispering in response, “Good morning.”
~ fin ~
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Oh, I knew it! No wonder the leopard wasn't with Peter, she was already protecting Rose. (Hey, that leopard knows who's important - and it's not actually either of them.)
And a few months along…she’d been pregnant when Peter had been shot. She felt a brief chill at the idea that he might have died before having the opportunity to find out they were going to have a child together.
Equally interesting, I should think, that after so much of Peter's POV, we sort of lose it here. Surely he must have thought the same thing, both upon hearing that Rose was pregnant, and hearing how far along she was - that Lucy was already started before he was shot, meaning that he'd never have known. Would the fact that Lucy was to be born, no matter how the bullets flew, be a comfort to him, or simply more devastating?
And for that matter, does Peter confront Nonnie again? Surely he must see the man at least one more time, in the line of work, if not by his own volition.
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It's a victim of pacing. I think it's very safe to say that this thought occurs to Peter quite quickly, once Rose tells him roughly when she's due; I suspect it's when he's in bed that night, Rose sleeping next to him, his mind slowly winding down. He'd realize it with a start, the cold reality of the idea washing through him, and he'd have a very hard time falling asleep after that.
I do not think it's something they ever truly discuss--they both know it, and they both know the other knows it, so why bring it up? But poor Peter--he'll kind of go back to the realization, and periodically obsess about it, during the course of Rose's pregnancy. And then, when she's in dire straits, he'd allow himself a brief wallow in the notion of Rose having to go through it alone, without him.
Peter does love his misery, sometimes.
And for that matter, does Peter confront Nonnie again?
Not alone, no. Of course there's a trial, and Peter and Elias both would have to give evidence during it with Nonnie standing in the dock. But I think Cunningham, et al, are scrupulously careful in keeping both Elias and Peter away from the man.
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Ok, off to work (joy) so proper comments later, but I couldn't resist.
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Yes, yes, you're very smart. \Peter Falk
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I really enjoyed this story, thansk for writing!:)
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Gawd, yes.
Really, I'd leave a real comment if my brain still worked. I think it's experiencing an overload of AWWWWW...
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Elias makes a handy little Greek chorus. ;)
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Thank you! The writing order of this little tale was Part 3, part 4, Part 1, Part 2; it kind of screwed with the balance (Part 3 starts with the phrase Part 4 ends with), but I think it ultimately worked out pretty well. ;)
I'm trying to imagine what it would be like to have 26 weeks of government-mandated maternity leave, though...
It'll drive Rose spare, is the short answer ;)
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I like the little detail of the light catching Peter's scars, a reminder of the reality of what could have been his death, while he holds new life in his arms. It's a beautiful image of everything coming full circle.
And I adore the fact that he's relearning his Gaelic so he can speak to his daughter fluently in it. It does indeed bring to mind the Doctor and the image of his speaking Gallifreyan to a child, as someone else stated above. It's again something that feels like it's coming around full circle.
Oh, I also adored Elias telling Peter off a bit about his attitude at working at the desk while he continues to recover. Peter is indeed a very needy partner and I like the fact that Elias can fill that need as necessary with humor and firmness and likely the best male friendship he's ever had. I've adored that relationship from the start and I'm happy to see it continue to develop so fully.
Usually when I read this I'm too tired to leave such a full review. Left you a bit of a book today. *grins*
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That was originally how it was going to play out, actually--but it was just too *convenient* a thing. So I tweaked it at the eleventh hour.
It's a beautiful image of everything coming full circle.
Thank you. I think that Rose kisses those scars every single time she and Peter make love, to remind herself of how precious his life is.
Oh, I also adored Elias telling Peter off a bit about his attitude at working at the desk while he continues to recover.
I love Elias dearly, and not just because I can have him say what I'm thinking ;)
likely the best male friendship he's ever had.
Unquestionably. They're an odd mix of brothers/partners, really, especially several years on. They're good for each other.
Left you a bit of a book today. *grins*
And I enjoyed it. Thank you!
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Words cannot convey just how much I love this story, I grinned from ear to ear throughout. Just absolutely wonderful xx
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Gorgeous story--one of your absolute best ones.
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Elias loves Peter as much as one straight man can love another--but he's not blind to Peter's flaws. It must be exhausting, some days, to be Peter's partner. ;)
Gorgeous story--one of your absolute best ones.
Thank you.
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*happy sigh*
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Love, love, love, love, LOVE! :)
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still playing catch up with what I've missed reading properly since Thanksgiving! -- Like all the yummy Professor!Peter stuff!
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Oh... that's. So. CUTE!!!!!!! *squees*
I think that was quite the perfect ending, with you starting off all dark and angst-y about Peter being shot and then right into the fluff and goodness of Rose and Peter starting a family!
I honestly had no idea that was coming, so I was very surprised and very happy! Characters being happy always makes me happy.
Excellent job! *hats off to you*
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Thank you. In spite of writing an awful lot of fluffy stories (when I'm not writing PWP, that is), I still have a deeply conflicted, love/hate relationship with writing it. I need that darkness to balance it, and I'm very glad it was something that worked for you in this story!
Characters being happy always makes me happy..
Hurrah!
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and of course there's that big gap between the news and Lucy being there with them, we already have the birth... and the story of him shaving her legs (ODG, I'd forgotten that one... must go reread...) do we get any stories of the inbetween ? (just got back with a ginormous bag of organic carrots for the plot bunnies)
Telling Jackie and Pete and John and Matthew ?
Telling Mickey and Jake, etc. ?
Conflict with all of the above about taking it easy because she's pregnant ?
The buying of the new house ?
The stress surrounding the construction on the new house to make that fabulous new bathroom ?
I could keep going... and going... there are SO many possibilities here. :)
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Not at the moment, no--I've been working on other things...namely, the timestamp meme requests.
The buying of the new house ?
Well...maybe. They bought it back in Year Seven ;) I think a higher priority, out of the list you've provided, would be the one where they argue about her taking it easy because she's pregnant; the challenge with that is that it's not a one-off, but a prolonged debate.
Enh, we'll see how the spirit moves me. ;)
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I have absolutely LOVED this installment in the life of Peter and Rose. And the ending is just beautiful. It's so wonderful to see them finally get the family that they've been longing for so long.
Oh, and Elias is awesome, as usual. He knows just how to deal with Peter's moods. ;)
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Hmmm...I know the answer to this, but I'm wondering just how much I want to give away. I'll say...Peter will be over 50.
I have absolutely LOVED this installment in the life of Peter and Rose.
Thank you! It's always a nice change to dabble in the darker aspects of Peter and Rose's life--as well as to be able to write about the more joyous times.
He knows just how to deal with Peter's moods. ;)
Elias and Peter are, in a word, simpatico.
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time enough for him to be up to going to work, but still earlier than Rose or his doctor would have liked.
Until Rose found herself seriously contemplating smothering Peter with a pillow if he snarked at her again, and he began constructing a rope out of bedsheets with which to escape.
and had been back for nearly a month by then
...wistfully staring at Peter's empty desk, wondering when his bestest friend would come back to school. Recess was so lonely without him!
he was trapped at his desk for at least another month, consigned to fielding phone calls and wrangling paperwork.
Of course it's nothing like being in Kendal, but I'm sure it has to remind him of that, at least a little, and therefore chafe doubly.
She’d seemed satisfied as she shared what she knew of Nonnie’s arrest
Something tells me Nonnie "fell down the stairs" a few times. Why yes, I do live in the Chicago area, why do you ask?
“So don’t feel sorry for yourself, thinking you can’t do a bloody thing because you’re trapped behind a desk.
Some of the best detecting is done behind a desk--or anywhere someone can just sit and think and work with the information before him--and Peter knows that.
you’re the most emotionally needy partner I’ve ever worked with
*snort* That's putting it mildly.
Rose began to feel under the weather. She was exhausted, and achy
And her boobs hurt like hell, and she was peeing All. The. Time.
...too much? ;)
It was a bit of a surprise, then, to learn that she was pregnant and not simply ill.
\o/
And a few months along…she’d been pregnant when Peter had been shot.
Two reactions here:
1) Oh, you sneak. She was pregnant all along!
2) OH MY GOD. She was pregnant all along...and if Peter hadn't...oh. *wibble*
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Well…depending on how tired I am in a month, I may yet sneak a midnight posting up around President’s Day. No promises, mind.
Until Rose found herself seriously contemplating smothering Peter with a pillow if he snarked at her again, and he began constructing a rope out of bedsheets with which to escape.
I suspect there was a lot of snarking there, right before Peter was freed. *pets Peter*
...wistfully staring at Peter's empty desk, wondering when his bestest friend would come back to school. Recess was so lonely without him!
Poor Elias!
Of course it's nothing like being in Kendal, but I'm sure it has to remind him of that, at least a little, and therefore chafe doubly.
Oh yeah. Peter is a very, very good detective, but he has nothing but bad memories associated with being consigned to desk duty. *kicks Williams*
Something tells me Nonnie "fell down the stairs" a few times. Why yes, I do live in the Chicago area, why do you ask?
Silly officers—they forgot to turn on the lights when they were leading Nonnie to his cell! How *were* they to see that doorjamb?
Some of the best detecting is done behind a desk--or anywhere someone can just sit and think and work with the information before him--and Peter knows that.
He does—he really does. He just wants to be back out there in the field, doing fun things like almost getting blown up.
*snort* That's putting it mildly.
Elias is so happy Peter’s back, he’s pulling a few punches. It won’t last.
And her boobs hurt like hell, and she was peeing All. The. Time.
...too much? ;)
Maybe, just a bit. ;)
1) Oh, you sneak. She was pregnant all along!
*g*
2) OH MY GOD. She was pregnant all along...and if Peter hadn't...oh. *wibble*
*evil grin*
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*snort* Yeah, you won't be needing to tell the neighbors, or any zanzare lurking within a mile or two.
Need to close those quotations at the end, there.
She was pregnant. With Peter’s child.
Did I mention: \o/? It bears repeating.
“How am I supposed to set ye a surprise for your birthday if you’re lurking in the house?”
Awwwww! Guess who's getting the surprise? Heeee!
Peter glanced down, seeing where her hand rested, and moved to cover her hand with his. “Our baby.” A beaming smile spread across his face, the corners of his eyes crinkling with happiness. He giggled then tilted his head back and shouted—a sound of pure, unrestrained joy.
SO. MUCH. LOVE. No words. There are no words. ♥ ♥ ♥
at least, if their expressions were anything to go by
The fact that Peter was probably grinning from ear to ear *might* have been a clue. Just a tiny one, though.
It also happened to be the very same coffee shop Elias had invited him to, back when Peter had been mulling accepting the job he now held.
Awwwww. It's their special spot, like the pub is for Professor!Peter and Heiress!Rose. These two have the most lovely bromance. :)
She was roundly cursing my name this morning when I left.
Misery, thy name is the first trimester.
Her arm landed in empty space, although the sheet was still warm.
Peter was up already to take care of the baby? He *must* be fictional. XD
He settled into bed, then gently lay back, shifting Lucy to rest on his chest, gently rubbing their daughter’s back as she squirmed briefly.
GUH. Men with babies. Hello, and welcome to another of my weaknesses. This image will be staying with me for a long, long time, thank you. No, really. Thank you. :)
caught the quick shine of one of his scars, and she leaned up to place a quick kiss across it as well.
A lovely echo of Professor!Peter and Heiress!Rose, here--again the scar serves not just as a reminder of what they almost lost, but of what they are so fortunate to have. No doubt it helps them not take anything for granted. If that makes sense.
Oh, I love this. I *adore* it. I wish my brain was working better so I could put into words exactly how, but I'm not caffeinated enough, so I'll have to settle for: love, love LOVE this.
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The zanzare are going to go *crazy* when they find out Rose is preggers.
Need to close those quotations at the end, there.
Um…when I get home.
SO. MUCH. LOVE. No words. There are no words. ♥ ♥ ♥
It’s not *exactly* the drabble I wrote…but it’s close enough.
The fact that Peter was probably grinning from ear to ear *might* have been a clue. Just a tiny one, though.
Blasted Elias and his powers of deduction. ;)
. These two have the most lovely bromance. :)
They’re a very sweet couple.
Peter was up already to take care of the baby? He *must* be fictional. XD
I think Peter probably wound up with a bruised sternum from all of the times Rose rolled over to thwack him; he’s been *conditioned*, just as Pavlov recommended.
Hello, and welcome to another of my weaknesses. This image will be staying with me for a long, long time, thank you. No, really. Thank you. :)
*where’s that picture from FoB…*
the scar serves not just as a reminder of what they almost lost, but of what they are so fortunate to have. No doubt it helps them not take anything for granted. If that makes sense.
It makes perfect sense, especially as that’s exactly what I had in mind. ;)
Oh, I love this. I *adore* it. I wish my brain was working better so I could put into words exactly how, but I'm not caffeinated enough, so I'll have to settle for: love, love LOVE this.
Thank you :)
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Ahem. No, lovely. I'd thought that maybe Lucy would be the result of his return home, but of course it makes more sense, is more chilling to think what would have happened had Peter died. It would have been particularly heartbreaking.
Wonderful *hugs
Thank you.
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Well, yes...but they're quite vivid in my imagination; it's nice to know they are in yours, too.
It would have been particularly heartbreaking.
Indeed--and I don't know that I'd ever be able to write that kind of story. I love Peter, and Rose, far too much to make them suffer so.
*hugs*
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Oh I knew that was going to happen. So wonderfully done yet again.
*melts into a puddle on the floor*
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I'm very, very happy you enjoyed this!
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*looks at icon; ovaries implode*