Title – The Way of Things, Chapter 24
Author[livejournal.com profile] jlrpuck  
Rating – K+
Pairing – Peter Carlisle/Rose Tyler
Spoilers – For both Blackpool and S2 of Doctor Who.
Disclaimer – Characters from Blackpool and Doctor Who are the property of the BBC, and are used with the greatest of love and respect; no profit is intended from the writing or sharing of this story.
Summary – A post-Doomsday story, set in the Alt!Verse. It's been over three years since Rose and the Doctor said goodbye. What happens when she not only meets his doppelganger, but has to work with him?
Author’s Notes – The morning—and the day—after Rose fell asleep at Peter’s. What does the day have in store—and how will her team react? 

[livejournal.com profile] earlgreytea68  and [livejournal.com profile] arctacuda  are wonderful, incredible beta’s—as I sat in a hotel, doing some final tweaking to this, EGT was (virtually) there to provide immediate feedback and several of her amazing suggestions. Although she ditched me for coffee, [livejournal.com profile] rosa_acicularis  has provided a wonderful sounding board, and has acted as an amazing final-reader for the story. [livejournal.com profile] misssara11  is the one who encouraged me to start writing in the first place, and who read over my early efforts at this story.

Two last things: First, I'm just blown away by the reaction to the story. The comments section never fails to make my jaw drop, and I never thought I'd see the day that I got 240 comments to one chapter. I know I missed replying to comments for this past chapter, and for that I am deeply sorry. I normally get to reply as comments are posted, and my travel schedule this week has made that impossible. I do read every single comment, though, and absolutely appreciate all of them (even the ones that [livejournal.com profile] principia_coh  and [livejournal.com profile] chicklet73  have been known to post when they're getting punchy ;)) Second, this is another of those post-and-dash days—I misjudged crossing the dateline (as usual) and so am posting this on a layover rather than posting late. I won’t be responding to comments for a bit (a girl has to sleep sometime), but I promise I will do eventually.

I hope everyone enjoys the chapter!


Chapter 1 | Chapter 2 | Chapter 3 | Chapter 4 | Chapter 5 | Chapter 6 | Chapter 7 | Chapter 8 | Chapter 9 | Chapter 10 | Chapter 11 | Chapter 12 | Chapter 13 | Chapter 14 | Chapter 15 | Chapter 16 | Chapter 17 | Chapter 18 | Chapter 19 | Chapter 20 | Chapter 21 | Chapter 22 | Chapter 23 | Chapter 24 | Chapter 25 | Chapter 26 | Chapter 27 | Chapter 28 | Chapter 29 | Chapter 30 | Chapter 31 | Chapter 32 | Chapter 33 | Chapter 34 | Chapter 35 | Chapter 36 | Chapter 37 | Chapter 38 | Chapter 39 | Chapter 40 | Chapter 41 | Chapter 42 | Chapter 43 | Chapter 44 | Epilogue


Peter wrestled with what to do after Rose fell asleep, curled against him on the sofa. The proper thing to do, of course, would be to wake her, drive her back to the hotel, make sure she spent the night in her own room. He knew he was selfish enough to ignore that option in favour of having her sleep in his house; even if they weren’t sleeping together, the thought filled him with a quiet excitement.

Then there was the question of sleeping arrangements. He’d love nothing more than to carry her upstairs, to see her asleep in his bed in his house, but he worried that moving her might wake her up—resulting in a request to go back to the hotel. He would also have loved to spend the night next to her on the sofa, her warm body against his, but the simple fact was that the piece of furniture was too narrow and too short. It might sound romantic, but the reality would be miserable.

In the end, he slowly extricated himself from the tangle of their limbs, gently lowering Rose’s head onto one of the throw pillows. He’d found a spare blanket which was actually clean and had quietly tucked her in, hoping she was comfortable. He leaned in and gently kissed her goodnight—freezing as she shifted in her sleep, and releasing his breath only when she stilled.

Ensuring the dishes were cleared and placed back in the kitchen, he stole upstairs and went to bed. Sleep came surprisingly quickly.

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Rose awoke, disoriented. She was still fully dressed, the fabric of the pillow against her cheek was rough, and the smell of the covers was unfamiliar. She slowly opened her eyes, blinking them against the light flooding the room as she focused on her surroundings.

She was in a parlour. Her gaze moved to the low table in front of her, a small vase of wildflowers gracing the corner—and she suddenly realized where she was.

Peter’s. She’d fallen asleep there? Where was he—and what time was it?

She hastily sat up, throwing the blanket aside as she swung her feet to the floor, running her hand through her hair as she looked at her watch. It was still early—but late enough that she might have been missed. She listened to the silence; no beeps could be heard from her phone, and there was no evidence at all that there was another person in the house.

She padded into the kitchen for her purse, and noted briefly that Peter had cleared the dinner plates before he’d gone wherever he had the night before. A quick check of her phone showed no missed calls or messages, and she sent a very short text to Mickey to let him know she was out, and safe.

Rose straightened her clothes as she looked around the kitchen, and once more ran her fingers through her tangled hair. She decided she could do with a cup of tea and, as silently as possible, searched through the kitchen until she found the things necessary for a cuppa. As she waited for the kettle to boil, she poked through the cabinets, curious as to what a bachelor like Peter might have; she was mildly amused by his rather odd collection of pint glasses.

There was still no sign of Peter as she finished her morning tea, and she sighed. She may as well make herself useful.

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Peter slowly awoke, his body tangled in the duvet after a rather feverish dream about Rose Tyler. He stretched, yawning, enjoying the pleasant buzz the dream had given him, then paused; he could hear someone moving around downstairs.

Rose.

He sat up hastily, frantically kicking the deep red fabric away. A glance at the clock told him it was relatively early for a Saturday, and he snatched up a discarded vest as he made his way across the room. He pulled the white cotton over his head as he strode down the hallway, made sure the string on his pyjamas was tied securely around his waist as he lightly ran down the stairs, tried to tame his hair as he approached the kitchen. The water was running, and he could hear Rose humming as she...dear God, was she doing the dishes?

He came to a halt just inside the kitchen door. Rose was at the sink, unaware of his presence; the morning light illuminated her features, her cheeks still pink from sleep, her hair still mussed. He waited until she was finished with the plate in her hand before making his presence known.

As expected, she jumped in reaction to his soft “Good morning.” She spun around, eyes wide—and as she took in what he was wearing, she blushed.

He was beginning to be glad he’d worn the shirt; seeing Rose in his kitchen, still rumpled from sleep, was making his body react in ways he didn’t want her to see. He decided he could get used to seeing her first thing in the morning.

“You certainly didn’t have to clean, you know—dinner was provided free of charge.” He stayed in the doorway, gesturing, trying to get his body to calm down.

She blushed further. “I’m sorry. Couldn’t help it—habitual neatener. Got used to it, livin’...” She stopped abruptly, and changed the subject. “Sorry ‘bout falling asleep on you.”

He grinned. “A man could take a thing like that personally.”

“Or he could take it as a compliment,” she shot back.

He crossed his arms, leaning against the door. “Oh? And how’s that?”

She shut the water off before turning and leaning against the sink. “You could take it to mean I felt comfortable enough to sleep here.” Her gaze bored into his, and he felt his breath catch.

They remained staring at each other across the kitchen, neither willing to break the silence following that statement. Finally he shifted, slowly walking over to Rose. He watched her as he crossed the small room; saw her fight to hold his gaze, hold still; watched her chest begin to rise and fall more rapidly. He stopped in front of her.

Her eyes were huge and dark, and he kept watching as he slowly leaned in; kept waiting for her to break the spell, to slide away. He was delighted when her eyes fluttered shut right before his lips met hers. He closed his eyes, focusing on the feel of their skin against each other.

The kiss was gentle, and he felt Rose’s hands slide up over his shoulders. He sighed in contentment, his arms enveloping her; he slowly moved his lips along her jaw, planting soft kisses in a line until he ended with her in a simple embrace. She rested her head against his chest, and he brushed another light kiss over her hair before speaking.

“I suppose you’ll need to be getting back?” His voice was soft, afraid of ruining the magic atmosphere in the kitchen. He felt Rose exhale against his chest.

“Eventually. I texted Mickey so he wouldn’t come looking for me.”

“Ah, yes, that could have been a bit embarrassing. Especially if he’d felt compelled to kick in the door.”

She laughed and looked up at him. He swallowed.

“I suppose you all had plans, though?” He loosened his arms and stepped back, giving her some space.

“The boys did, yes. I had planned for a day off.” Her eyes sparkled.

“Ah. So...I don’t suppose you’d be up for a trip to the country? For lunch?” His voice sounded hopeful, even to his own ears. She smiled.

“I’d love to. But...I need a shower and a change, I think.”

“Oh! Of course—can’t have you going out in public looking so very dishevelled. More fodder for the gossips, you know.” He winked, and watched her blush. “I’ll just get dressed then, and return you to your hotel? Unless you’d like some breakfast? You really should be sitting before I say this, but I have things for a fry-up...or cereal...”

Rose smiled. “Breakfast would be lovely.”

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He’d made another nice meal, and the two of them had spent the time chatting about anything and everything. Another bridge had been crossed by what had happened; she could feel it, could see it in how Peter was acting. She longed to enjoy this rapport and connection, but the voice was back, practically screaming at her to tell him of the Doctor.

Peter had placed the dishes in the sink and, with a firm scolding not to even think of doing the washing up, had run upstairs to change. She was nearly rendered speechless when he returned downstairs a few minutes later wearing jeans, trainers, and a tee shirt for a band she’d never heard of. He looked like a completely different man.

“Who are you, and what have you done with Peter Carlisle?” she only half-joked as she grabbed her purse. He gave her a wry grin as he led her out of the house and to his car.

“You’d be amazed at the wide variety of clothing buried in my wardrobe; white shirts and dark trousers might obscure anything else, but there’s a wee bit of variety. “

“Do people recognize you when you dress like this?”

He laughed. “Rarely. You should see how invisible I become when I wear colour.”

He’d dropped her at her hotel with a promise to return for her at one o’clock; she’d been grateful to make it up to her room without encountering anyone she knew. A note had been slipped under her door, and she noted with amusement that Jake, James, and Mickey had each written admonitions followed by demands for scuttlebutt upon their return. She laughed, setting the note aside before taking a shower and getting dressed.

She tried to read for a bit, finding it difficult to remain focused on the book in front of her when images of Peter kept intruding. She finally gave up, writing notes for each of her team members and slipping them under their doors before retreating downstairs to once more meet up with Peter.

As he’d done the night before, he greeted her with a quick kiss as she got in the car. She blushed under his scrutiny as he looked at what she’d chosen to wear.

“Is this alright? You’d said the country.” She’d pulled on a pair of khakis and a cotton shirt, her cardigan was balled in her lap, and she was wearing her nicest boots; Peter was dressed far more casually, still in jeans but wearing a pale blue dress shirt rolled up at the cuffs.

“You look lovely. As always.” His gaze was filled with heat, and she felt her body flash with desire.

He smiled slowly at her, and she debated the merits of dragging him out of the car and up to her room. Her conscience pulled her back, yelling at her body for skipping ahead.

Peter was grinning at her now, and she leaned over and kissed him quickly before smiling.

“We going to sit here all day, or are you actually taking me somewhere?”

He blinked, realizing he was supposed to be driving, and hastily engaged the clutch. Peter deftly navigated, shifting up and down as they made their way through the twisting and turning roads that would lead them out of town; it wasn’t until he had accelerated, clear of the traffic and the speed restrictions, that Rose spoke again.

“Where are we off to?”

“One of the great houses, just near the motorway. There’s as many of those as there are ruins, and this one has gardens that I think you might like. Assuming you like gardens?” he asked tentatively. Rose smiled her agreement.

“And what’s for lunch?”

“You’ll see.” He glanced briefly at her as they drove.

They arrived towards the end of lunch, and were able find a parking spot not too far from the picnic area outside the entrance to the house. “Eat, then tour?” he asked as they met at the boot of the car.

“Certainly.”

She got to assist him this time, helping to lay out the picnic in a small, sun-dappled patch of grass under the trees. He’d brought fruit and cheese for lunch, along with some bread and summer sausage; for a drink, he’d brought not only water but some lemon squash. There was plenty of room for them on the blanket, but she noticed he was never more than an arm’s-length away, and they chatted happily as they ate.

The car park had emptied a bit more by the time they were done with lunch, so they cleaned up the evidence of their picnic before heading to the entrance to the gardens. There were couples and families throughout the spacious landscape, and their tour was accompanied by the sounds of children at play intermingled with birdsong.

Peter was as familiar with the gardens as he was anything else in the area, and he gave Rose a thorough and delightful tour, holding her hand and guiding her along the numerous pathways. The flowerbeds were full of spring flowers, and the fountains danced merrily; the cricket pitch was clear except for the occasional running child, and the shrubbery was a deep, shining green in the light.

As they cut through one hedge, Peter stopped suddenly, turning and pulling her to him for a brief, intense kiss. She slowly opened her eyes as they pulled apart, looking up at him; his eyes were a deep brown, the clear light illuminating his fair skin and making his brown hair rich and lush with colour.

Her left hand on his chest Rose reached up with her right, hesitantly threading her fingers through Peter’s hair. His eyes closed, and he seemed to sag against the boxwood as she savoured the feel of her fingers in his hair. It had been warmed by the sunlight, and slid through her fingers like silk; the action released the smell of his shampoo, adding to the already heady scent of the garden. She slowly drew them down his face, following his short sideburn, lightly running her fingers along his still clean-shaven jaw, and as she cupped his cheek, he turned to kiss her palm. He opened his eyes as he turned his head back to face her.

Time seemed to stop around them.

She stood, staring at him, her eyes tracing the freckles dusting his face. Her chest tightened as she looked at him, as she slowly began to realize that what she was feeling for him might be more than a casual interest. The voice in the back of her mind was insistent, telling her she was running out of chances to tell him about her past so she could make a future with him.

Reality came crashing back as a small child came barrelling by them; the harried father smiled apologetically as he came running past. Rose rested her forehead against Peter’s chest and began to laugh.

“Who would have thought gardens would be so full of menace?” Peter asked drily. She looked up to see him smiling. “I’d have seen him, too, if you hadn’t distracted me so effectively.”

He planted another quick kiss on her lips before taking her hand and leading her back onto one of the paths. “The boxwood is lovely, but I’d rather not use it as a wall—it’s a bit prickly.”

“Suits your personality.” She grinned at him when he turned to her, shocked. She watched as his eyes drifted to her tongue, peeping out of the corner of her mouth.

“That wasn’t very nice, Tyler,” he growled, pulling her alongside him.

She continued grinning, unrepentant. “I never claimed to be nice, Carlisle.”

There was a flash in his eyes as he once again swooped down for a kiss. It was like a lightning strike—brief, intense, electrifying—and Rose was breathless when he pulled back. “Neither did I,” he said softly, as she tried to catch her breath.

They walked along in silence, Rose trying to comprehend what had just passed between them. She felt flushed and incredibly aroused by Peter’s actions, and she wondered what other tricks he had up his sleeve. She found her eyes straying to his lips as he periodically glanced down at her, to his arse as he would precede her; her body was begging for him, and she knew without a doubt that this was her last best chance to tell Peter her secret. As they emerged once more from the shade of a bower into the sunlight, she decided it was time to tell him about the Doctor.

“Peter...” Her voice was soft, uncertain; he turned his head to look at her.

“What is it, Rose?” His voice was gentle, his gaze intent. The world once again compressed, the two of them alone, surrounded by green in the sunshine. Rose closed her eyes, and swallowed before reopening them.

“I...I need to tell you something. Something important.” She was terrified, her voice quavering as she looked anywhere but at Peter. She glanced up at him when he didn’t reply; he was scanning the garden around them, looking for something. He looked back at her.

“C’mon. I know just the place.” Peter knew all of the shortcuts, and they were soon seated on a bench in a quiet corner of the garden, facing each other.

Rose could feel adrenaline coursing through her, Peter’s anticipatory silence doing nothing to quell her nerves. This was it. Everything was going to change after this—for better or for worse. She could think of only two other times in her life when the fork in the road had been so clear.

Peter was patiently waiting for her to speak, concern and curiosity flickering in his eyes. A dark corner of her mind wondered if this was what he was like when he waited for suspects to confess.

She swallowed. “You told me about Blackpool. I think it’s my turn to tell you about my past.” She noticed his eyebrows twitch; other than that, he kept his features—even his expressive eyes—under remarkable control. “I...I don’t even know where to start, really.” She gave a helpless laugh. “Easiest bit first, I suppose.

“You asked last night how I started working for Torchwood. I’m sure you noticed some gaping holes in the story I gave you--would have been hard not to.” She took a deep breath, held it, and exhaled. “This is going to sound fantastic. Just stick with me.”

The corner of Peter’s mouth quirked. “I think my horizons might have broadened a bit this past month.”

“’s what I’m counting on. “ She took one last deep breath before plunging ahead. “Up until just about four years ago, I spent several years travelling. With a man. But it was more than that.” She looked up at him, holding his steady gaze. “The man looked human, but was alien. And we travelled through time and space.”

She paused, gauging Peter’s reaction. There was none—not a twitch, not a blink, nothing. She continued, shifting her gaze off to his side. “It sounds ridiculous. Insane. Mad as a hatter, that Tyler girl. But it’s the truth. I went out there—” She gestured, her arm sweeping towards the sky above. “Saw things you wouldn’t believe. Places you couldn’t imagine. Stuff that was wonderful, and horrible, and everything in between.” Her gaze returned to his. “All of it living and travelling through space, in a ship with an alien who looked like a man.”

She paused and took a breath. “I know you’ve seen my file, know you’ve seen stuff in there about ‘experience’ with no further explanation. That’s what it means. I’m one of only two humans on this planet who’ve seen and done things like that. That’s why I work for Torchwood.”

Her voice trailed off. Peter hadn’t reacted at all, and she felt the tension radiating off him.

A bird trilled somewhere behind her, and Peter’s gaze drifted over her shoulder. He finally spoke, his eyes returning to hers.

“Mickey.”

“What?”

“Mickey’s the other person.” He stated it as accepted fact.

“Yeah.”

Peter shifted so his back was against the bench, his legs stretched in front of him. “Your parents know?”

“Yeah, they both met the Doctor.”

Peter looked confused.

“The Doctor. That is—was—his name. Jake met him a couple of times, too. Not many other people around here did.”

“And when you say space, you mean space.”

“Yeah. Saw the Universe. Planets, galaxies...black holes. And some things you’d never expect.”

Peter sat in silence as Rose nervously chewed on her lip. She fought not to stare at him, her eyes ranging over the greenery surrounding them as he processed the information she’d shared.

When he spoke again, she jumped. “What aren’t you telling me?” His voice wasn’t angry—it was soft, and contained a note of curiosity.

She blinked, confused. Peter sighed, turning to her and taking her hand. “I’ll grant you, the fact that you spent...how long?”

“Three years.”

“Three years travelling in space with an alien is rather an important thing. Unexpected, certainly, but given what I’ve learnt of Torchwood it’s not as unbelievable as it might once have been. But—“ he leaned forward, “you should know me well enough by now that that fact alone wouldn’t bother me. Well, at least once I processed the ‘time’ part of ‘travelled in space and time.’” He gave her a quick smile, and she smiled weakly in return. “So what’s really bothering you, Rose?” His voice was low, his eyes intent; he ducked his head to try to meet her slightly lowered gaze.

May as well get it all on the table, then, Rose thought. “It gets even more fantastic.”

He squeezed her hand, and she continued.

“How much were you able to find out about me? I know you tried, so don’t deny it.” Her voice was wry. Peter had the good grace to look abashed.

“Not much. Hardly anything at all, really. Your past is sealed off like a brick wall.”

She nodded and once again held his gaze. “That’s because, up until just about four years ago I didn’t exist. Not here.”

His eyebrow arched, and he sucked in a corner of his bottom lip. She continued.

“It’s surreal. Four years ago, my mum lived on an estate—Powell Estates—in London; what I said last night, about that? It was all true. The United Kingdom had a Prime Minister; aeroplanes not zeppelins were used to get places. It was—is—a parallel universe. They really exist. I’m proof of that.”

Peter’s look contained a hint of disbelief, but he held his tongue.

“My mum is my mum. Pete Tyler is not my dad. Not this Pete—at least he wasn’t when I got stuck here. Mickey, Mum, and I, all of us came over.” She sighed, her eyes dropping. At least Peter hadn’t let go of her hand; he was still listening.

“Four and a half years ago—for me—Mickey, the Doctor, and I fell through a hole in time and space into this world.” She squeezed his hand and looked up. “That would be when we met up with John Lumic, and thought we’d taken care of the Cybermen. That’s when we met Jake—and when I met Pete and Jackie Tyler. Not my mum, but Jackie Tyler. There are twins of almost everyone in each universe. My real dad was also Pete Tyler—Peter Alan Tyler, actually, not Peter Michael Tyler like he is here. He died when I was a baby in my universe. Here, he became a millionaire. My mum survived, raised me in my universe; here, Jackie Tyler was Cyberised before we could stop Lumic.” She closed her eyes against the memory of that night, so long ago.

“That’s the first reference in your file,” Peter said, softly.

Rose reopened her eyes. “It is. A lot happened then—nothing important to this conversation, not really. Except Mickey decided to stay behind. He’d had a doppelganger here, too—Rickey. Rickey died—we couldn’t save him—and Mickey saw a way t’ help. He stayed, and we left. And I thought that was it.” She paused, and Peter shifted. Releasing her hand, he brought an arm around her shoulder and pulled her to him; she snuggled against him, his warmth and scent helping her to focus.

“So how’d you end up here, Rose Tyler?” His voice was deliberately light.

She laughed. “Torchwood, if you can believe it. Not this one—not completely. The other one. The one I...well, the one in my original universe. The bastards found a way through, only they didn’t realize how disastrous punching holes through to alternate universes could be. And they had no idea what lurked in the space in between. Cybermen, Daleks—all sorts of terrible things came to our world because of their stupidity. And so the Doctor did what he always did: He tried to fix things. It was crazy, and there’s a lot to tell. The important bit, though, is that when he finally managed to close the hole between universes, it was me and my mum on this side of the wall, and him on the other. He found a way to let me know that that was it—no more crossing over, no coming back. And that’s when I became who I am today.”

There was silence between them briefly before Peter spoke. “So...Jackie is your mum. But Pete isn’t your dad?”

She smiled wistfully. “Yeah, technically. The Doctor was a bit of a closet romantic. We’re in the middle of fighting, and he still found time to play matchmaker with those two. It took a bit for them to get to know each other, but they can’t imagine life without the other now.”

Peter paused, and then asked his next question. “What about you? Was there ever another Rose Tyler here?”

Rose laughed. “Yeah. She was Jackie’s Yorkie. Doctor got a good laugh out of that.” There was fondness in her tone at the memory of his reaction that night. “Pete...he’s been great. It was awkward at first, yeah? But I love him like he’s my real dad, and he’s one of the best friends I could hope for. He makes my mum so happy.” Her voice regained its wistful note.

“Did...did you love him?” Peter’s voice was soft. She didn’t have to ask who he meant.

“Yeah. Yeah, I did. He was my world—three years of living with him, seeing amazing things with him, bein’ his companion. It took me a little bit to realize I could live without him.” She sighed. “He taught me so much; showed me so much. He made me who I am. I can’t imagine life if I’d not met him.”

She felt Peter’s lips brush her hair, and felt his jaw rest on the top of her head; she sighed and enjoyed Peter’s closeness, the comforting sound of his heart through the fabric of his shirt.

They remained seated in silence as a family walked past them, through the small garden, and out the other end. As they disappeared, Rose pulled back and gazed up at Peter. He looked serenely accepting of her story.

“You believe me?”

“I see no reason not to. I do trust you, Rose—and I’ve learned enough in the past month to believe quite a lot I wouldn’t have before.” He focused on her, his eyes searching her face. “Was that what you were worried about? That I’d not believe you?”

She gave him a small smile. “Some of it, yeah. There aren’t a lot of people who know—not just because they wouldn’t believe it, but because it could be a dangerous thing if the wrong people knew.”

“You’re who you are, Rose. I’m not going to say there won’t be times where it might strike me as unusual, your background—but you’re here, now, with me. And if how you got here is a little unusual...well, we all have things that put us where we are today.” He paused, and she saw vulnerability flash in his eyes. “If it means being here, now, with you? I wouldn’t change any of them.” His voice was soft.

Rose closed her eyes, enjoying his closeness, his calm acceptance of her past. It would be so easy to pretend there wasn’t more to it, that the hardest thing to tell was that she’d come from another universe and not that the Doctor looked like the man sitting next to her—the man that, she realized with some shock, she was falling in love with.

Her throat tightened. How had she even come to feel this strongly for Peter, patiently sitting next to her, when she’d only known him a month? She was falling, no question. Not because he reminded her of the Doctor, but because he was Peter Carlisle. Because his eyes crinkled when he laughed. Because of his sarcasm, because of his cleverness. Because of his terrible dress sense. Because of his intensity, both with work and with his personal life.

Because of how he looked at her, and because of how he made her feel.

She wanted to laugh and cry—the universe certainly did enjoy tormenting her when it came to relationships. Hadn’t she paid karma enough for her treatment of Mickey? Didn’t it owe her, just this once?

The thought briefly tempted her, to just let things go. To talk with Mickey and Jake and her mum and Pete, begging them not to tell Peter about the Doctor...but she couldn’t. It wouldn’t be right, and it wouldn’t be fair. Peter absolutely deserved to know the rest of the story.

She reopened her eyes and saw Peter looking at her; her heart skipped a beat at his expression, and she swallowed nervously. This was going to hurt, and she wished--not for the first time--that she’d done this before. Before he’d started to look at her like that; before she realized how much she cared for him. “Peter...that’s not all.” She felt her adrenaline spike again, saw Peter’s expression become still as he watched her reaction.

“Y’ see...almost everyone has a double between universes. I didn’t, and I never met Jake’s, but everyone else does.” She looked at him, watched him wait for her to finish her statement.

“The Doctor was yours.”

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From: [identity profile] artic-fox.livejournal.com


ARGHHHAHHHHH! YOU CAN'T STOP THERE! You're mean (and BRILLIANT!). I adore, adore, adore this fic, and now I'm itching for the next part. Don't make us wait to long - I think I might implode!

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It's only a few more days!!! I'm glad you, er, enjoyed he chapter ;)

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This chapter's superb now. Wicked (in both senses of the word) and superb.

And it's so dark in my house I can't see the keys to type. Where is the sun?!?!

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The sun is hiding, remember? I told you it had fled from the movie I watched on the flight. ;)

I'd forgotten just how wicked we'd made this chapter, actually...

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I am sooooo loving this! Waiting with baited breath every time I go online and check for more. I was not looking for it right now and was so surprised to see it here, thank you so much but I might be late for work now.... It was worth it.

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Heh. I couldn't wait to get to work so I could read this!

Hello, Evil Corporate Overlords! I swear I am being productive! I only kid about reading fic at work....ha ha ha see me joke...

Wasn't this a fantastic chapter? Well worth a bit of tardiness, as you said. *g*

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ADBGSDFFJM,ZDVLKSJJJK!

YOU JUST STOP THERE! ARE TO TRYING TO KILL ME?!

but i am tremendously proud of Rose, telling him everything.

please, please, please don't take too long with the next chapter!

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No! Why would I want to kill you?! I just...ah...well...

OK, maybe I am ;)

There was much debate as this was written about *how* Rose would tell Peter. Would she tell him piecemeal? Would she tell him before she left town? For about five chapters, I'd send a fresh-from-the-hard-drive document off to EGT for beta with the comment "Rose is going to tell Peter next chapter! I swear!" and then, well, my Muse went in a different direction. I think she finally stopped believing me right about the time I sent this one to her. And, in the end, it wound up nothing like we'd discussed. Ah, the creative process!

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Such the perfect gentleman.../sigh.

May as well get it all on the table, then, Rose thought. “It gets even more fantastic.”

Yes, fantastic, and Monday is sooo far away.

This is the perfect chapter to enjoy with a cup of coffee...nice and mellow, just enough sweet, with that boldness throughout and leaving you with wanting more. Yep, very very addicting :)


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Oooh, it's always a good thing to be compared to a nice cup of coffee (*she says, staring longingly at the coffeepot*). Peter's chivalrous, in his own way--how far will that chivalry extend, though? ;)

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My jaw just dropped. And I'm pretty much speechless.

Ending it there!? What a tease.


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It was a good spot for a break! Honest! Ok, and maybe I purposely went for the cliffhanger, too. ;)

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THAT'S WHERE YOU END IT? NOOOOOO.

Oh not fair. Loved it. But still... Guh.

*must read them all again to get my fix till you come back*

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I'm glad you loved it! I spent many, many months trying to work out how and when Rose would tell Peter--if, indeed, she'd be the one to tell him at all--and I think it worked out alright in the end ;)

See you Monday!

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GAH! What a horrible place to stop! And now we have to wait all weekend for his reaction?! ::narrows eyes:: You're cruel [livejournal.com profile] jlrpuck.

Brilliant chapter, though. I should be getting ready to go to class, but I had to read this first. It's the highlight of my week.

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I've been called many things in my life, but 'cruel' is a new one :)

I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter; it's rather close to my heart, because it shows how things *could* be with Rose and Peter. Well, at least how I think they could be. Eventually...

Hope class went well!
ext_43: proust quote: let us be happy to those that make us happy.  They are the constant gardners that make our souls blossom. (Default)

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Oh. This is so lovely. I can't wait for the next part. *sets TARDIS to Monday*

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I'd add my ARGH! to the others, but you get the general impression, I'm sure... :) *whimper*

This is a fantastic series - very well written. Thank you.

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Hmmm. If chapter 22 was the "GUH" chapter, I reckon this one is the "ARGH!" Chapter.

Thank you for the kind words--I'm glad you're enjoying the series! :)

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*sob*


*THUD*

That’s the sound of me hitting the ground after falling off that steep cliff you left. Dear God Woman! At least put a warning! I got to the last line and the blank space after thinking that I hadn’t read all of it yet given the average length of you chapters, and therefore expecting Peter's reaction after the blank space. But cruel woman, I scroll down and all that was there was the comment section.

*sob*

Does this type of torture violate the Geneva Convention?

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Does this type of torture violate the Geneva Convention?

Not according to the latest comments issued by the Bush Administration.

At least put a warning!

On this point--and this point alone--will I admit malice aforethought. I edited this for publication on the plane, and stared long and hard at the comments. Do I put a warning? Do I allude to what's to come? In the end, I decided it might pack more of a Peter-like punch if I just left it without. Which, well...manipulative, yes. But if you'd had the warning, you wouldn't have enjoyed the first 3/4 of the chapter nearly as much.

Right? ;)

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*FLAILS*


SQUEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE-(more soon too incoherent joy glee now rapture t-shirt she touched his hair she told him)-EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE- (also, Peter Michael Tyler!)-EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!

“The Doctor was yours.”

DUN!

A more perfect way to say it, a more perfect way to end the chapter, simply could not exist. I am reeling. REELING.

You win like a winning thing which wins. Victoriously.

Reading again now.

SQUEEE!

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I know! Who knew running you hands through someone's hair in public could be so erotic?

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Wow... I've got a lot of things to say about this chapter, so I'll just go through it chronologically.

It might sound romantic, but the reality would be miserable.
I like the realism of this. (Also keeps him from temptation, doesn't it?)

she was mildly amused by his rather odd collection of pint glasses.
A true boy, our Peter.

The water was running, and he could hear Rose humming as she...dear God, was she doing the dishes?
This had me laughing. The sheer panic you've found in his voice is so endearing (because of the subject matter). It's not the same, but have you ever seen the episode of Coupling where Susan tidies Steve's flat? The panic has a similar feel, I think.

He was beginning to be glad he’d worn the shirt; seeing Rose in his kitchen, still rumpled from sleep, was making his body react in ways he didn’t want her to see. He decided he could get used to seeing her first thing in the morning.
His body, huh? Dare I say the pj pants might be more use in camouflaging that? ;0)
I love that last line too-- very squee-worthy. The whole back-and-forth about her sleeping there is very comfortable. They've really found their own rhythm.

“Ah, yes, that could have been a bit embarrassing. Especially if he’d felt compelled to kick in the door.”
I think Mickey's got more sense than that, but couldn't you just picture it? :0)

Peter's very gentle with her in the kitchen. The description of their kisses sounds like he's afraid she might break (though it's very sweet). Half of me is surprised that Peter can cook, just because I wouldn't have guessed it, but then I think about his oral fixation and the fact that he's had to do all his own cooking for quite some time, and it makes sense.

Peter had placed the dishes in the sink and, with a firm scolding not to even think of doing the washing up, had run upstairs to change. She was nearly rendered speechless when he returned downstairs a few minutes later wearing jeans, trainers, and a tee shirt for a band she’d never heard of. He looked like a completely different man.
Sounds like he's dressed up as DT ;0) Love the scolding.

“Do people recognize you when you dress like this?”
He laughed. “Rarely. You should see how invisible I become when I wear colour.”

I wonder if he uses this to his advantage.

she noted with amusement that Jake, James, and Mickey had each written admonitions followed by demands for scuttlebutt upon their return.
Adorable-- I think she's got herself three brothers there.

Did Peter change clothes after he dropped Rose off, or did he just add a dress shirt over his t-shirt?

He blinked, realizing he was supposed to be driving, and hastily engaged the clutch.
Caught up in the moment-- we were all right there with you, Peter.

“Suits your personality.” She grinned at him when he turned to her, shocked.
You've peppered the chapter with this friendly teasing, and I think it does a lot to convey their relationship.

I love the way Rose explains the truth to Peter-- it doesn't feel like a block of exposition, and that's hard to do with something like this.

“Y’ see...almost everyone has a double between universes. I didn’t, and I never met Jake’s, but everyone else does.” She looked at him, watched him wait for her to finish her statement.
“The Doctor was yours.”


Oooh. Very dramatic, and just a tad evil. I like that Rose is conflicted about telling him, but her desire for that longterm relationship with Peter pushes her to tell the truth. It's important that she does consider asking all the people who know the Doctor to keep quiet-- it's very real, very human. After all, she isn't perfect. It's also so important that it is Peter she's in love with, though I'm afraid his insecurities will get in the way of letting him see that. I'm afraid of this putting a huge barrier between them. I really hope we get to see this news from his perspective next chapter. I'd love to know what he was thinking as Rose told her story, what he thought might be coming up, and what he thought at each revelation.
Fantastic chapter.

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It's also so important that it is Peter she's in love with, though I'm afraid his insecurities will get in the way of letting him see that. I'm afraid of this putting a huge barrier between them. I really hope we get to see this news from his perspective next chapter. I'd love to know what he was thinking as Rose told her story, what he thought might be coming up, and what he thought at each revelation.

It doesn't seem like Rose is quite at the point of telling him her feelings yet, though, and I wonder how that would have affected his reaction to her revelations if she'd said something first about her being fairly certain she was falling in love with him. Would Peter feel manipulated if she told him how she felt and then gave the big reveal? Or if she follows up the reveal by telling him how she feels, letting him know that that is precisely why she's telling him? How will he feel then?

I don't know that Peter is going to feel used, per se, but I do think he's going to feel incredibly stupid at the very least, if not out and out deceived.

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He knew he was selfish enough to ignore that option in favour of having her sleep in his house; even if they weren’t sleeping together, the thought filled him with a quiet excitement.

Another w-heavy ‘aw’ here.

He’d love nothing more than to carry her upstairs, to see her asleep in his bed in his house…

Uh-huh.

It might sound romantic, but the reality would be miserable.

From having seen my share of English houses, I would surmise that the trend for gigantor furniture hasn’t ever made it across the pond.

She padded into the kitchen for her purse, and noted briefly that Peter had cleared the dinner plates before he’d gone wherever he had the night before. A quick check of her phone showed no missed calls or messages, and she sent a very short text to Mickey to let him know she was out, and safe.

And a quick look out the window to make sure no van is parked outside… :)

Peter slowly awoke, his body tangled in the duvet after a rather feverish dream about Rose Tyler. He stretched, yawning, enjoying the pleasant buzz the dream had given him, then paused; he could hear someone moving around downstairs.

Rose.


Now would not be the time to enjoy a rather leisurely Saturday morning version of Chapter 22.

He was beginning to be glad he’d worn the shirt; seeing Rose in his kitchen, still rumpled from sleep, was making his body react in ways he didn’t want her to see. He decided he could get used to seeing her first thing in the morning.

I would think he’d be more glad for the jim-jams, but I guess he’s still a little sleepy. *ruffles hair*

She blushed further. “I’m sorry. Couldn’t help it—habitual neatener. Got used to it, livin’...”

With a hyperkinetic alien who might be the only person to beat Peter Carlisle for the Longest Consecutive Eating Streak record? I shudder to think how bad the kitchen must’ve gotten if there wasn’t some soniced-up dishwasher available.

The kiss was gentle, and he felt Rose’s hands slide up over his shoulders.

I’m amazed she didn’t give into the temptation to feel up his arms. Isn’t this about the least clothing she’s ever seen him in?

“Ah, yes, that could have been a bit embarrassing. Especially if he’d felt compelled to kick in the door.”

Stop! Nookie Police! You’re under arrest!

…but I have things for a fry-up...

Isn’t it mandatory for all males over the age of 16 in Britain to keep an assortment of the greasiest foods on hand for a fry-up at any time of the day or night? :D

She was nearly rendered speechless when he returned downstairs a few minutes later wearing jeans, trainers, and a tee shirt for a band she’d never heard of. He looked like a completely different man.

You mean like David Tennant? *glee*

So, any takers as to what the alt!verse versions of The Proclaimers and Deacon Blue might be called?

“Do people recognize you when you dress like this?”

He laughed. “Rarely. You should see how invisible I become when I wear colour.”


It’s his secret Scottish Ninja costume.

He’d dropped her at her hotel with a promise to return for her at one o’clock; she’d been grateful to make it up to her room without encountering anyone she knew.

Note to Rose: they’re probably still sleeping it off from last night. I wouldn’t worry about it too much if I were you.

A note had been slipped under her door, and she noted with amusement that Jake, James, and Mickey had each written admonitions followed by demands for scuttlebutt upon their return.

What, no cartoons of the two of them smooching? ;P

She finally gave up, writing notes for each of her team members and slipping them under their doors before retreating downstairs to once more meet up with Peter.

It’s one o’clock and they’re still not up? It’s those newfangled 24-hour pubs, I’m tellin’ ya.

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Stop! Nookie Police! You’re under arrest!
*snicker*

It’s his secret Scottish Ninja costume.
*falls on floor laughing*

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Peter was dressed far more casually, still in jeans but wearing a pale blue dress shirt rolled up at the cuffs.

Vest or no vest? Inquiring minds want to know!

He smiled slowly at her, and she debated the merits of dragging him out of the car and up to her room.

Now there would be a recipe for harassment from the lads.

Her conscience pulled her back, yelling at her body for skipping ahead.

Stop it! That’s not ‘til at least Chapter 32!

“One of the great houses, just near the motorway…”

Ooh, which one?

She stood, staring at him, her eyes tracing the freckles dusting his face. Her chest tightened as she looked at him, as she slowly began to realize that what she was feeling for him might be more than a casual interest. The voice in the back of her mind was insistent, telling her she was running out of chances to tell him about her past so she could make a future with him.

Listen to your inner Jiminy Cricket!

She continued grinning, unrepentant. “I never claimed to be nice, Carlisle.”

Ooh, there’s a Doctor moment (see the conversation with Elton in Love and Monsters).

She found her eyes straying to his lips as he periodically glanced down at her, to his arse as he would precede her…

Men fail to realize that we’re not always being subservient when we want to walk behind them. :)

Her voice trailed off. Peter hadn’t reacted at all, and she felt the tension radiating off him.

You can almost hear the gears turning in his head at this point.

“Mickey’s the other person.” He stated it as accepted fact.

He is begrudgingly referred to as clever for a reason.

His eyebrow arched, and he sucked in a corner of his bottom lip.

Is that his BS detector going off? Thoughts?

“It’s surreal. Four years ago, my mum lived on an estate—Powell Estates—in London; what I said last night, about that? It was all true. The United Kingdom had a Prime Minister; aeroplanes not zeppelins were used to get places. It was—is—a parallel universe. They really exist. I’m proof of that.”

Would he even know what an airplane is?

“My mum is my mum. Pete Tyler is not my dad. Not this Pete—at least he wasn’t when I got stuck here. Mickey, Mum, and I, all of us came over.” She sighed, her eyes dropping. At least Peter hadn’t let go of her hand; he was still listening.

At least she’s going whole-hog and telling him pretty much everything. No hinky gaps for him to fill in on his own.

Rose laughed. “Yeah. She was Jackie’s Pomeranian….”

I hate to be pedantic, but Rose the dog is a either a Cairn or a (very trimmed) Yorkshire Terrier, not a Pomeranian.

“Did...did you love him?” Peter’s voice was soft. She didn’t have to ask who he meant.

She felt Peter’s lips brush her hair, and felt his jaw rest on the top of her head; she sighed and enjoyed Peter’s closeness, the comforting sound of his heart through the fabric of his shirt.

They remained seated in silence as a family walked past them, through the small garden, and out the other end. As they disappeared, Rose pulled back and gazed up at Peter. He looked serenely accepting of her story.


And now he thinks he knows the totality of why she’s telling him. So she loved him, but are we going to receive any clarification as to how reciprocal the relationship was?

“Was that what you were worried about? That I’d not believe you?”

Um, no. And not because of that ‘it could be a dangerous thing’ bit either.

Her throat tightened. How had she even come to feel this strongly for Peter, patiently sitting next to her, when she’d only known him a month?

So how quickly did Rose fall for the Doctor, then?

Hadn’t she paid karma enough for her treatment of Mickey? Didn’t it owe her, just this once?

I’m glad to see she’s finally processed how poorly she treated Micks, but she should know better than to expect the universe to let her off the hook that easily.

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Stop it! That’s not ‘til at least Chapter 32!

That’s a month away!

So she loved him, but are we going to receive any clarification as to how reciprocal the relationship was?

I second that question.

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This was going to hurt, and she wished--not for the first time--that she’d done this before. Before he’d started to look at her like that; before she realized how much she cared for him.

You mean like when Mickey told you to? Oh, sorry, did I say that out loud?

I wonder how differently this whole scenario would’ve played out if she’d simply told him as soon as he got clearance, gotten it off the plate right away. Would it have meant that Peter never would’ve gotten involved with her in the first place – and if that’s likely to have been the case, what impact will that have on his reaction? Will he feel as if she robbed him of his choice in the matter?

“The Doctor was yours.”

And this is the part where one starts to question why Rose didn’t think of the following things:

1. Peter drove you out into the country in his car. How are you going to get back if he decides to leave?

2. Peter is a gentleman (well, sort of). He may not leave you there, no matter how badly he wants to, because he wouldn’t do that. How is he going to get the space he needs if he still feels obligated?

3. This may not be his house, one of his secret hidey-holes, his favorite pub, or the station house – but it is a fairly public place, with children around, still on his turf. Is he going to feel like you picked this spot to tell him in order to keep him from being able to react as he’d naturally be inclined to?

One wonders if this is where she’s hit the limits of Peter’s suspension of disbelief, but given that the way she looked at him from the start didn’t escape his notice, I’m guessing that shock-based reaction won’t last long.

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And this is where I get to add the comments that I of course couldn’t to the relevant threads back in Chapter 23, ‘cos I don’t want to spoil anyone who hasn’t read the latest installment.

A good chunk of what we were talking about specifically last chapter has just gone out the window, and I’m frankly glad for it. Rose’s forthrightness may be a bit late in coming, but at least she’s putting it pretty much all out on the table and isn’t giving Peter the cherry-picked bits of truth that suit her fancy. So he won’t feel the need to try to ferret out anything else from Mickey or Jake or whomever, since there’s not really anything else left to ferret.

How crushed is Peter? Will he unleash the inner snark beast, or is this just too big for him to react to with anything other than a quiet retreat? I guess we’ll find out on Monday, grrrargh.

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I wonder how differently this whole scenario would’ve played out if she’d simply told him as soon as he got clearance, gotten it off the plate right away. Would it have meant that Peter never would’ve gotten involved with her in the first place

A very good question. I can't help but think that he might not have...he's still a man with remarkable self-control, and if he had been bound and determined to NOT let feelings develop between himself and Rose (reactions of his body notwithstanding, and even those probably would have been dampened considerably if his heart wasn't in it, or his mind for that matter, as we've seen with Duvet Woman) they probably wouldn't have.

And I think that, if he had known about his twin, that, though he wouldn't have been angry, he certainly might have been put off enough to just not want to get close to all that weirdness, and never get to know Rose in the first place.

Peter drove you out into the country in his car. How are you going to get back if he decides to leave?

All I know is that is going to be one damn awkward ride back...*cringe*

How crushed is Peter? Will he unleash the inner snark beast, or is this just too big for him to react to with anything other than a quiet retreat?

It actually may be the second. He may have to shut down entirely to keep from saying anything he would regret. Or to keep from having some sort of outward reaction that even he couldn't predict...you're right; this is big enough that he may desperately want to get someplace private where he can process this without an audience, not even (well, probably especially not) with Rose.

That said, I believe the inner snark beast will get his say, one way or another. It's Peter Carlisle, it's bound to happen. Whether it will be solely internal or not remains to be seen.

I guess we’ll find out on Monday, grrrargh.

NGH. Is it Monday yet?

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This is the first time, I comment here (and believe me: I rarely comment on fanfiction). Your story is really really good: I love Crossovers and your characters are totally believable, as are their thoughts and their actions. I love this story and can't wait to read more.

Thank you so much for writing this :)

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Thank you so much for writing this

Thank you, most sincerely, for commenting on this. I hadn't expected folks to take to this quite so much, and it's incredibly nice (terrible, overused word, but it captures the entire spectrum of emotion I feel on this) to see the response, to see folks adopting the characters and story as their own.

I appreciate your taking the time to comment, and I've very glad you're enjoying the story. Cheers!

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Away we go...part 1


*takes a deep breath*

OK, so I'm still reeling, but hopefully I'll be able to approach some form of articulate discourse on this chapter. Which, by the way, was pretty darn good.

If by "pretty darn good" I mean "I have used up all the capital "E"s alloted to me for the entire year because I was brimming, nay - overflowing, nay - exploding with squee after reading this."

First and foremost because of The Big Reveal; which, as I mentioned, was absolutely perfectly crafted. The way she introduced the concept of cross-universal twins first; made it a human and approachable idea by talking about the very personal and real stories of alt!Jackie and alt!Pete and Rickey; and then and only then she told him. Plainly, simply, concicely and honestly.

"The Doctor was yours."

And it's so brilliant; because it's not that they looked similar. It's not "You remind me of the Doctor." You had Rose use the word "twin" so Peter could know immediately and with great impact exactly, clearly, what she meant. So instead of a slow dawning of undersanding we've got him hit upside the head with a load of bricks and that, my friend, was the way to give this impact. To knock us sideways the same way he was, to feel it along with him. The reeling...

I just can't say enough how much I liked the way you did it - the laying out of all the facts. The Doctor, parallel universes, Rose's love for the Doctor. All of that put together and out on the table before making him deal with what promised to be the most painful thing of all.

Can you imagine if it had gone the other way? If she'd blurted out the fact he looks exactly like the man she loved first, and then tried to explain? He certainly wouldn't have been listening, probably so confused at first and then hurt and betrayed and then the whole thing would have been awkward and clumsy and muddled and I just don't think it would have worked so well.

And if you had Rose do it that way because she sensed that the Doctor/Peter twin-ness would be the most difficult thing of all for him to hear; then wow, it just goes to show how much she does care for him. How she's been paying attention to how he operates and what he thinks and feels. That sort of paying attention requires effort and energy and a motivation born of true and human love for another person (and it doesn't necessarily have to be romantic love, though in this case that's what we're certainly all hoping for). I do suspect that's why she did it this way - and even if it wasn't a conscious process, planning every detail and consciously taking into account "if I say this in this way it will make him feel that way" etc., I really do find it very moving, the obvious depth of feeling that she has for him through this whole chapter.

And as for Peter himself - well, first of all, whenever I think of him my brain keeps getting all clouded by images of him in his pajamas and/or in jeans and a t-shirt (I actually bit my lip to keep from squeeing out loud when he came downstairs in that getup). How fantastic that you've added another facet to his outside-of-work self; and how fantastic that you've given us some truly stunning mental images.

I'm not certain how Rose kept from climbing him like a damn tree on either of those occasions. MROWR.

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You had Rose use the word "twin" so Peter could know immediately and with great impact exactly, clearly, what she meant. So instead of a slow dawning of undersanding we've got him hit upside the head with a load of bricks and that, my friend, was the way to give this impact. To knock us sideways the same way he was, to feel it along with him. The reeling...

My question, setting aside any 'little green men'-related snark on Peter's part, is that if she's serious about the whole 'twin' thing, is he going to question what does that make him?

I mean, I've certainly seen no indications that this is going the way of a HN/FoB rewrite, so I'm going to assume Peter Carlisle is indeed simply human born and raised, but still, mightn't it raise a few questions?

...I just don't think it would have worked so well.

Not that it was going to work well any way she did it. Like I said above, at least she didn't say 'I think I'm falling in love with you. And oh, by the way, you look just like the alien I lived with for three years.'

I can only imagine the sorts of questions Peter might throw at her, assuming he doesn't take off immediately. I mean, she wasn't exactly clear on the nature of the relationship. Were she and the Doctor lovers?

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Away we go....part 2


And then you have lines like these:

He was beginning to be glad he’d worn the shirt; seeing Rose in his kitchen, still rumpled from sleep, was making his body react in ways he didn’t want her to see. He decided he could get used to seeing her first thing in the morning.

Oh god, such heat and such sweetness all at once and welcome to why we're all completely smitten with the Peter Carlisle in your story...

*SWOON*

I love the fact that they're already so comfortable with each other. I love the fact they can't help but think about a future together. I love the fact that they still try and kind of deny those thoughts. I love their picnic and their banter ("Suits your personality" she said of him and the prickly boxwood) and their moments of passion and I love love beyond the telling of it that she played with his hair. (I've always imagined that having his hair played with is A Thing with him, a fantastic and meaningful and knee-jellifying thing, and there's a whole story that goes behind it but that's a different kettle of fic altogether but suffice it to say: *LOVE*. Also, *MELT*)

I was up until 2am this morning and every few minutes I found myself over here hitting the "refresh" button hoping you'd posted. And when I woke up this morning, one of the first things I thought of was that this would be waiting for me to read when I got to work. And I smiled and knew it would be a very good day, indeed.

p.s. Is it Monday yet??

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I love the fact that they're already so comfortable with each other. I love the fact they can't help but think about a future together.

And sadly, I think we're about to see this go down the tubes, at least for a little while.

(I've always imagined that having his hair played with is A Thing with him, a fantastic and meaningful and knee-jellifying thing, and there's a whole story that goes behind it but that's a different kettle of fic altogether but suffice it to say: *LOVE*. Also, *MELT*)

I think there's a certain comfort/nurturing aspect to playing with his hair that Peter particularly enjoys because his was a relatively affection-starved childhood (we assume).

I was up until 2am this morning and every few minutes I found myself over here hitting the "refresh" button hoping you'd posted. And when I woke up this morning, one of the first things I thought of was that this would be waiting for me to read when I got to work. And I smiled and knew it would be a very good day, indeed.

How sad am I? I actually looked up the length of flights from Portland to Tokyo so I had a window within which I figured it would be posted. I turned out to be right on the money, but the hubby was in a snuggly mood this morning.

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Wicked, wicked woman! I love how you phrased the revelation (The Doctor was yours.); such a punch in the gut.

Is it Monday yet?

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I love how you phrased the revelation

Excellent catch--it was quite deliberate ;)

It's already Friday for me, so three days to go!

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Wow oh wow oh wow oh wow!!!!!!!!!!!!

This beautiful, wonderful story gets me through my week at work.

Thank you x

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Oh--I hope next week doesn't disappoint, then!

Thanks for the lovely, lovely comment.

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SON OF A GOOSE! You can't just leave it there! OMG. Now I'm not going to be able to concentrate on ANYTHING until Monday. *facepalm*

He’d found a spare blanket which was actually clean and had quietly tucked her in, hoping she was comfortable. He leaned in and gently kissed her goodnight—freezing as she shifted in her sleep, and releasing his breath only when she stilled.

He's so damn cute I can't even help myself!

The water was running, and he could hear Rose humming as she...dear God, was she doing the dishes?

Talk about domestics! :) See, she's totally comfortable doing the dishes AND Peter likes the image of her doing so. Looove is in the air.

“I’m sorry. Couldn’t help it—habitual neatener. Got used to it, livin’...”

LIVIN' WITH THE DOCTOR!

She was nearly rendered speechless when he returned downstairs a few minutes later wearing jeans, trainers, and a tee shirt for a band she’d never heard of.

This sounds absolutely amazingly gorgeous. Reminds me of that one picture of DT in jeans and the white shirt with the moose on it... ♥

A note had been slipped under her door, and she noted with amusement that Jake, James, and Mickey had each written admonitions followed by demands for scuttlebutt upon their return.

I adore the relationship/comraderie that these four have. It's freakin' amazing and priceless.

...but wearing a pale blue dress shirt rolled up at the cuffs.

AGAIN WITH THE BARE FOREARMS!

“That wasn’t very nice, Tyler,” he growled, pulling her alongside him.
She continued grinning, unrepentant. “I never claimed to be nice, Carlisle.”
“Neither did I,” he said softly, as she tried to catch her breath.


AH! Banter. And sexy banter at that. Who wouldn't love it?!

She could think of only two other times in her life when the fork in the road had been so clear.

I know somebody's probably already asked it, but I don't have time to check right now - what were the other two times? Deciding to go with the Doctor and deciding to stay with him in "Doomsday"?

"The Doctor was a bit of a closet romantic. We’re in the middle of fighting, and he still found time to play matchmaker with those two."

I love that you admit he's a closet romantic, 'cause he totally is. And sometimes he's not even a closet one! ♥

“The Doctor was yours.”

OH DEAR BABY JESUS! That's not even fair. And then you end it. Grr...

*prays it could be Monday faster*

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I'm not going to be able to concentrate on ANYTHING until Monday.

I KNOW! Never have I so happily wished my weekend away. Is it Monday yet?

Or, to borrow from some clever person who posted a previous comment:

*sets TARDIS to Monday*

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Why!!!!!!!!! I luv you but that was evil.
It was angst-free and sweet and then you left it in the most horrendous cliffhanger ever.
cant wait for Monday.

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I figured the ratio of sweet:evil about balanced out in that chapter ;)

See you Monday!

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Hadn’t she paid karma enough for her treatment of Mickey? Didn’t it owe her, just this once?

And while in the throes of picking images for a *wibble* Carlisle icon set, I've replayed some of the conversations between Carlisle and Natalie. Another possible self-blame angle for Peter: perhaps he'll consider this his karmic payback for the way he lied to Natalie. Does this mean he'll be more prone to forgive Rose or at least be less angry, since Natalie did end up at least temporarily forgiving him? Or will he be every bit as hurt and angry but simply turn it all inward?

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If anything, he may be a little bit less angry at Rose, but equally or more angry with himself. Not only for letting himself fall for her, and what he sees as bad judgement and lust-blindness and stupid choices on his part; but also because Natalie forgave him, and he might think he should forgive Rose, but he's too initially hurt/betrayed/angry to do so, and thus also has guilt on top of everything else.

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